hi The only addition to it i would suggest would be, if the red moon in the back ground is a moon not a sun then add craters and other details to it. If its is a sun then maybe more rays of light coming from behind the character.
Because currently the sun looks very Microsoft paint -ish what i mean by that is that its all one shade of red. An that gives this very filled in effect where there's no depth to it.
Other than that its really very good I hope this was helpful From Laughter-in-a-Jar cya
Aaaah, that hat! <--(cannot draw hats to save her life, suspects superpowers in those who can) The time-lapse was fun and interesting to watch- you're super careful with your lineart, so you get to spend less time erasing later on.