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Voor Elysa - NL
Voor Elysa
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Zwijgend staarde ik naar het eindeloze zwart in de ruimte. Zwarte, kale muren, een zwarte vloer en een zwart plafond. Het zwarte, de onmiskenbare duisternis. Het leek wel alsof er nooit een einde aan zou komen. Alsof ik hier voor eeuwig zou zitten. Eigenlijk was ik van dat laatste ook stellig overtuigd

Hoeveel dagen er inmiddels al verstreken waren, wist ik niet meer. Ik was al lang geleden gestopt met tellen. Het leek allemaal toch zinloos te zijn. Mensen wisten niet langer van mijn bestaan af. Of eigenlijk waren ze het niet eens echt vergeten, ze wílden het zich simpelweg niet herinneren. En in dat laatste kon ik ze ge

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A series of drawings to experiment with colors and lighting conditions, in order to learn about them.

Second one: sunset
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Critique by =IdiotTwins Jan 6, 2013, 11:22:35 AM
i can say, that for a color experiment this turned out very well. Some colors are a little bit to bright if you look at a sunset like this in real life. For example, the blue-purple shade in the left upper corner. Also, the light that shines on the face usually reflects a little bit in the face. You did this very well in the eyes and crow, but I miss it in the face. If this would be a picture, it would be made with a flash light. This is the same with the railing in tbe background. Some advice is to shade a little darker to create more depth in the picture. But all over all, you're going the right way!
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=IdiotTwins Jan 6, 2013  Student General Artist
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=IdiotTwins Jan 6, 2013  Student General Artist
i liek this one more~
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=DamaiMikaz Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
TY :)
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